I joined English 191 class last Thursday. I did not write the story since it was too late.
Our group came up with the criteria to evalue the story in the box
Group 5
Criterion 1: 12 objects can be found in the story (3 points)
Criterion 2: grammar (2 points)   
Criterion 3: structure (3 points)
Criterion 4: logical flow (4 points)   
Criterion 5: interest (3 points)
The class discussed the evaluation points for each story.
Criterion 1: Creative use of the 12 items (5 Points)
Criterion 2: Interest (4 Points)
Criterion 3: Organization/Structure (3 Points)
Criterion 4: Flow (2 Points)
Criterion 5: Grammar/Spelling (1 Point)